Saturday, March 21, 2009

¡¡legacy!!

Hi,
These days I was thinking of what I want to be when I am big. And I get to the conclusion that I want to be a tennis player because I love playing it and I like very much doing sport. I want to be the best tennis player. My inspiration of being a tennis player is to be like the best tennis players of know.One of my dreams when i grow up is to win the gramd slams.
I want people to know me because I am persistent and of my good humour. Some day i wil realize my dream!!!
And with all the money i will recive i will construct a fundation for all poor people in the world and an academy for every people that wants to go!!

¡¡Bye!!
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8 comments:

  1. ade caicedoApril 19, 2009 at 3:58 PM

    Hi mape
    That is a nice dream and I wish it become true, because you are a very good tennis player.
    Remember you can say different words and not always "...tennis player...".
    It is a very nice textabout your legacy.

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  2. anamaApril 21, 2009 at 3:41 PM

    Hi mape.. i loved your legacy is very nice to want to be sport player.Remeber not to repeat many times the same word "tennis player" use pronoun for the text to be more coherent.
    bye att anama

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  3. Juli3paApril 21, 2009 at 4:07 PM

    hi mape very nice your legacy is very creative your sp is ok
    bye :D

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  4. jaimeApril 21, 2009 at 5:00 PM

    Hi Ma. Paula, your legacy is very creative and very good, is nice that you want to be a tennis player becaause you like it a lot and because you are a very good tennis player. I hope that wish will become true. Bye.
    Congrats.

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  5. sacaApril 21, 2009 at 7:24 PM

    hi
    so interesting lagacy be a tennis player
    i like it.
    you have good sppellind the ideas were complete
    you can put the name of your ispiration to play tennis bye

    continue writing

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  6. Daniela AndradeApril 21, 2009 at 8:02 PM

    HI mape look it was agrat tet but i think something do not have coherence. bye

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  7. Santiago Bonivento.April 22, 2009 at 5:25 PM

    Mape: Very nice text and what a fantastic legacy.... Good spelling and punctuation marks are properly..!!!
    I wrote you this one week ago, but Internet fall down and I remember today to write in your blog.

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  8. ...aDrI...April 27, 2009 at 7:08 AM

    Hi Mape ... well your legacy is very nice well do you are going to create an academy is nice so you teach more people and you share your expierneces .... no spelling mistakes .... bye

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