I like this brand because its products are very colourful and bright! I like it most than the other brands because Agatha Ruiz de la Prada the cloth is very funny and of very different stiles than the others. Although these things are expensive they are very nice and are a good present for a girl. Agatha Ruiz de la Prada sells: lip gloss, perfumes, bags, etc. Really this is a very good place for buy.
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Hi mape:
ReplyDeletethe text is very short you could add more information is well spelled and you are missing some punctuations marks.
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att:anama
Mape i think your text is well structured, have soso punctuation and have many colors and for me is difficult to read, the spelling is well and the information is well done, i think the text will be larger
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ATT:Andrea.
Mape , nice election is the same topic as juli, but you are missing information and more things , you put that there were expensive just not put that because it doent matter and that dont put it because is not good put it, we dont care that,you have a good puctuation and is very colorful!!CORRECT ITT°
ReplyDeleteyour text is very short, you could say why its your favorite brand, your favorite product, why you like it, many things.
ReplyDeleteAlso brands for girls is a very common topic many people write about it.
Mape:
ReplyDeleteI think you could tell more things about Agatha like: history, stores.
Very nice punctuation and sp.
You have a short text.
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