Hi I am going to talk about an interview of energy conservation is key :
It is about a kid named Madison Hartke that does some questions to the administrator Lisa Jackson of the EPA. Those questions are about how the government helps the environment and some other important things about the care of the environment but the most important theme was how and with what they are going to help the environment and in geneneral all the conversation talks about that.
My opinion is:
That the government and EPA are really helping the environment because with the interview it noticed they are doing their best and determined to help the environment and because they are really doing things for helping the environment.
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ReplyDeleteMape:
ReplyDeleteI agree with your oppinion and I also think we can aply this ideas here in Colombia and from ours families.
The text is well wroten but it is not so coherent because in the oppinion you didnt use ANY punctuation mark, the rest is ok.
Very complete text.
anama.
Mape:
ReplyDeleteYou did a very good text but you repeted some times the same in the first paragraph.
Also, you missed some punctuation marks, without them your text is not so coherent.
VERY WELL JOB!!!!!!!
mape: you did a very great text but like ade sed you repete many ideas in the first paragraph.
ReplyDeleteatt: lala :)
hi mape i think your opinion is fine but it is very short. it is coherent and well structured you have some sp and verb conjugation mistakes correct them you have to correct P.
ReplyDeletegood job!!!
sofi c
Mape: I agree with your opinion because, how you said, they are helping the environment. You need more coherence in your text because you repeat many words and you did not used the punctuation requaried. In some parts of the text it is confusing to understand the idea.
ReplyDeleteYour text is well structure and complete and it seems you uderstood the video of energy conservation.
Good Work.
Congrats!!!